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As I walked down the street I noticed a gigantic black crow sitting on a rail right in front of me. I could see the crows face and his black dirty feathers. When I walked past a normal crow it would fly away. Yet when I passed this crow he just stood there looking at me. The crow just sat there as I stood there looking at it. I wondered what was the matter with the crow why was it sitting there staring at me. I didn’t know.
As I walked closer to the crow it just stood there looking at me still with its black eyes. I didn’t know why but the crow scared me it wouldn’t leave when I got near to it. So I ran. I don’t know why I ran but I did. When I stopped running the crow was still there eyes staring at me.
If eyes are the portals to the soul what did the crow see when it looked at me? Could that be the reason why the crow didn’t run away? Or maybe there was something else something to do with the crow perhaps. I still didn’t know. There was something definitely something strange about that crow I wish I knew what was the problem with that crow.
When I think about that day I wonder what was wrong with the crow. Was it coincidence or was there another more important reason why the crow was there looking at me. In my dreams I think about the crow.
In the dream the crow is flying towards me. When the crow gets near me it changes shape into a person. The person who stands before me is a beautiful person and that person looks at me like he knows me. The eyes that the person has are black as a crows and they have the same stare as the crow’s eyes. When the man came forward he took me in a tight embrace. It was like he knew me a long time ago.
When I woke up from the dream I could clearly remember everything that had happened. When I thought about the person very hard I could remember a memory. The memory had me and the stranger in it. The memory was like a dream a strange dream…
I was in a long midnight blue dress. The dress was in a Victorian style. There was the stranger. He was dressed in a very good looking suit. I was hugging the stranger and he was looking at me in return.  His eyes seemed to scream I love you! That’s when I started to hear there conversation.
“But I love you I don’t care what you are!! I love you!” I could see that the women who looked like me was very distrait.
“I know you love me but it can never be. You don’t want to live a life like mine. Always running, hiding living in the dark.” I could see that the stranger was frustrated yet he also looked worried.
“I love you! I made my choice a long time ago” Then the women who looked like me started to cry. The stranger held me even tighter.
“I know…,” then taking a deep breath he continued “I love you! And I understand your choice. But before we continue and I make it so you can spend your whole life with me forever. I want you to think of your family and your friends.”
“I have made up my mined and there is no living no joy no way I can live without you in my life and the only way that we can be together forever is if I am like you.” When the women looked up I could see that she had made up her mind.
“Ok… but this will be painful. It’s not easy to give up your life. To become like me.” I could see that the women had won. She would get what she wanted.
Then the man took a deep breath and slowly bent down on one nee. He then grabbed the girl’s wrist and whispered ‘I am sorry” then he bit into her wrist.
My eyes widened I knew at once what they were talking about. He was a vampire and she fell in love with him. He was going to changer her into one so they could be together forever. And know he was back for his long lost love me!!!!!!...
i had a very strange expercnece with the crow and when i wrote the strory down my imagination went wild ( or did it ??)
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MartyWitch Jul 4, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
...You're weird. And a vampire?? And a Dalek. And the Queen of Ireland. Morgon is many things. Weird being the operative one. But this is clever. I like it. :D
Dalek-Morgon Jul 9, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
your werid too u know!also its a story it really happened the crow thing and i just took it from there :):evillaugh:ordid i ...............
MartyWitch Jul 9, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, you told me about that. Crows are creepy. They wake me up a lot in the summer when my window's open and the stupid bloody things won't shut up.
But yeah, I'm really weird!!! :D And proud of it!!!!! :XD: :XD: :XD:
Dalek-Morgon Jul 11, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
yah i know what you mean
MartyWitch Jul 11, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
In fact, this very morning I had to close my window. The weird part was, was I could hear the crow sound, but in my head they were speaking English...
Yes, Morgon. Be afraid of my half-asleep delusions. :XD:
Dalek-Morgon Jul 15, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
creepy evil crows (evil crow story!!!!)
MartyWitch Jul 19, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeek!!!!!!! :XD:
Dalek-Morgon Jul 19, 2008  Hobbyist General Artist
yep cawwww
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